I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Deegan Yay! You have your first blog post up. There are so many things you can blog about to share your learning and I think you will really enjoy it.
kia ora Deegan my name is Ashton from hornby high school well done on your first blog post. Maybe next time you could write about what you like. what year are you because you do good on your blogs.
Kia Orana Deegan, Your very first blog post! Well done! Next time you could put information about what you like, but other than that you should be good to go for your blog!
Kia Ora Deegan, I really like your post and probably you can add more stuff about you- But not private information of course! 😂 what's your favourite colour? what do you like doing? and what do you not like, what's your favourite pet? if you see this you can answer these questions on your post and update it, Nice picture by the way.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Deegan
ReplyDeleteYay! You have your first blog post up. There are so many things you can blog about to share your learning and I think you will really enjoy it.
kia ora Deegan my name is Ashton from hornby high school
ReplyDeletewell done on your first blog post. Maybe next time you could write about what you like. what year are you because you do good on your blogs.
Kia Orana Deegan,
ReplyDeleteYour very first blog post! Well done! Next time you could put information about what you like, but other than that you should be good to go for your blog!
Kia Ora Deegan, I really like your post and probably you can add more stuff about you- But not private information of course! 😂 what's your favourite colour? what do you like doing? and what do you not like, what's your favourite pet? if you see this you can answer these questions on your post and update it, Nice picture by the way.
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