I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kian here that is a nice car maybe you could explain why you would want this car and what colour you would like it to be but it is still a nice car though bye
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
hello deegan this is thomas here i am going to comment on well i don,t no but hello deegan
ReplyDeletehi my name is brodie and I liked that you would buy the car but can you put a reason why you would buy it.
ReplyDeleteHi Kian here that is a nice car maybe you could explain why you would want this car and what colour you would like it to be but it is still a nice car though bye
ReplyDeletei would to but where are you gonna get a car💵💵💵💵
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