I am a Year 5 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Deegan. I like your blog post about Fanimals coming in it was so cool pat Molson and get a card signed by Jess. Whakamanawa was so lucky to get extra time with Molson and get a few photos with them. Do you like Fanimals?
Kia ora Deegan. Nice post! Maybe next time check your spelling over. Cool photos sadly I wasn't there. Also describe more about it next time :) - Milla
Kia ora Deegan, I like the picture you put in there but it doesn't tell us what is this. Many people don't really know what Fanimals are (spell check) maybe try describing the animals are like. I'm pretty sure that you're really good at posting but I think you need just a tiny bit of improvement next time.
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Kia Ora Deegan.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about Fanimals coming in it was so cool pat Molson and get a card signed by Jess. Whakamanawa was so lucky to get extra time with Molson and get a few photos with them. Do you like Fanimals?
Blog you later.
Kia ora Deegan.
ReplyDeleteNice post!
Maybe next time check your spelling over.
Cool photos sadly I wasn't there.
Also describe more about it next time :)
- Milla
Kia ora Deegan, I like the picture you put in there but it doesn't tell us what is this. Many people don't really know what Fanimals are (spell check) maybe try describing the animals are like. I'm pretty sure that you're really good at posting but I think you need just a tiny bit of improvement next time.
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