I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What is Daffodil Day? It is an opportunity to raise awareness of cancer in New Zealand. Since 1990, our iconic street appeal has inspired people to come together and support
Kia ora Deegan. I am glad to see you have created a blog post as part of our home learning and Daffodil Day. It would be good to see more of your work on your blog and maybe some of your own writing.
Hi Deegan, I love to see you putting in an effort of any kind and this topic matter deserves a mention as much as any other charities that exist.I would of loved to of heard, how and what a street appeal is.The year it started might of been interesting. Who started it and for what reasons.Maybe a slide of a volunteer collecting. Hey maybe you could edit some of these ideas in, what do you think? Stay awesome, help out your mum, and be kind.
Hello Deegan It's Great seeing Daffodil Day On Blogs It just makes me Feel good but Maybe Not do plagiarize and Steal from google and Maybe do I slide with your own facts that you found out but in your own words, But It would look cool with Ideas from you in a Slide Maybe work on that? - Orlando
Hey Deegan, This is very nice of you to do this. I like how you put the daffodils image on here. Maybe next time you can do this in your own words instead of copying and pasting it.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Deegan.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see you have created a blog post as part of our home learning and Daffodil Day. It would be good to see more of your work on your blog and maybe some of your own writing.
Hi Deegan, I love to see you putting in an effort of any kind and this topic matter deserves a mention as much as any other charities that exist.I would of loved to of heard, how and what a street appeal is.The year it started might of been interesting. Who started it and for what reasons.Maybe a slide of a volunteer collecting. Hey maybe you could edit some of these ideas in, what do you think? Stay awesome, help out your mum, and be kind.
ReplyDeleteHello Deegan It's Great seeing Daffodil Day On Blogs It just makes me Feel good but Maybe Not do plagiarize and Steal from google and Maybe do I slide with your own facts that you found out but in your own words, But It would look cool with Ideas from you in a Slide Maybe work on that? - Orlando
ReplyDeleteHey Deegan,
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice of you to do this.
I like how you put the daffodils image on here.
Maybe next time you can do this in your own words instead of copying and pasting it.